Editing a Ghostwritten Manuscript

Your ghostwriter has just finished the first draft of your book, and now it is time for you to review the manuscript. Follow our guide below to make sure your writer has hit the mark and to guide your revisions.

1.     Does the writing sound like you?

a.     Yes: Excellent! Gold star for your writer.

b.     No: Point out passages that do and do not sound quite right. Specific examples of word choice, tone, and style will help your writer get a better sense for how to revise.

2.     Is the writing truthful and factually correct?

a.     Yes, everything is based on my experiences or research: Great. Make sure to avoid any unnecessary fabrication.

b.     No, some parts were embellished: Be wary of passing off exaggerated stories as your own. Remember what happened to the A Million Little Pieces guy? Stick to the truth and nothing but the truth unless you’re writing fiction.

3.     Did the writer hit the key points of your narrative or idea?

a.     Yes: Good news. Make sure the big points are present and prominent.

b.     No: If you think any key items are missing, let your writer know. It can also help to pinpoint a chapter or section where you think the missing pieces should be included.

4.     Do you like the book?

a.     Yes: You should. If all has gone according to plan, you and your writer have worked together on the project and your input has been put to good use.

b.     No: Perhaps you don’t hate it, but you’re just not happy with the first draft. Be honest with you writer, and explain why you aren’t in love with the manuscript. This is your book, and you should be proud and enthusiastic to be the author.

If you are able to answer yes to all of those questions, the rest of the revisions will be easy. Pay attention to the details (such as diction—if you’ve never said obsequious in your life, don’t put it in the book) as well as the overall flow of the book. Honest, detailed feedback is the best kind, and you and your ghostwriter can work your way to an even better second draft.

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